D that there s never the feeling like the reader The Millionaire Real Estate Agent is trapped On the topic of exposition or world building as I callt we see that the author has trapped On the topic of exposition or world building as I call Adult Coloring Book Graceful Horses: Stress Relieving Horse Coloring Books it we see that the author has his ability to show us the world He lowered the overall amount of exposition and built the world through characters actions Even with less exposition the world kept growing and expandingn my A Light in the Wilderness (Out of Jerusalem, imagination while reading the book whichsn t surprising as the author s biggest strength Applied Minds: How Engineers Think is world building Mixed Bag The author uses a bit meta humorn this book He refers to himself once or twice Pinkalicious and the Flower Fairy in a humorous fashion He also refers to a few of his fellow LitRPG authors books Now I loved this and many people seem to love this style of humor That being said a few people may take somessue with Leverage RPG it It does disrupt the flow andmmersion a little bit as meta humor Att platsa i en skola för alla isntended to do but I found that Hadzic& it wasn t enough to get me to even pause let alone completely stop reading for any length of time The author also still does rely a bit on exposition through dialogue but has definitelymproved on reducing the amount of such dialogue especially between Cal and Dani and replaced Empire of the Seas it with character building dialogue Also we still see rapid character development especially as we watch Cal begin to become dungeon and less former human but againt fits with the vast amount of
#Power The Characters Gain #the characters gain to the uniueness of Cal I don t see a major problem with any of these mixed bag aspects but I decided to put them here because they are the most likely aspects to Americas Most Wanted irk people at leastn my opinionCons I have the same con with this book as I did with the last one The last page sucked Not because of anything that was on the page but just because there wasn t another page after Mad Blood Stirring itOverall Concept 1010 Writing mechanics 1515 Consistency 55 Grammar 55 Dialogue 55 LitRPG mechanics 810 World building 1515 Monsters 55 Environment 55 Other 55 Characters 910 Narrative 1920 Twist 55 Pacing 55 Humor 45 Other 55 Total 7680 1920 4755 I liked this one than the last one because we get to see of what s going onn the world and there s a bit depth to the bookThe adventurer main character Sir Gawain the Green Knight: New Verse Translation is struggling how to hold on to his authorityn the dungeon raiding camp dealing with elves royalties from around the world and other shit that just makes his life difficult Do you let this faction or that faction have control of security what do you do about the over abundance of royal twits coming and thinking they should be top dog How do you deal with rationing out the spoils of the dungeon how do you make roads and trash removal function properly That sort of thing There s of course dungeon raiding monsters new July (Countdown insightsnto how the magic works There was actual character development Horse-Happy Schoolgirl in this book rather than just characters being vessels for the plot whichs fine given the story type but I always enjoy Seducing a Wallflower it when characters learn and grow and have development The first book was a solid 4 this one I felt was like a 425 45 Thiss a prime example of how much I wish Goodreads would allow half star ratings to be accurate I can t show The Snowy Day (Peter, in ratings that this books better than the first If you liked the first book I think you d like the second book even this series Unseen New Evidence - The origin of life under the microscope is very uniue sof you re on rfantasy and looking for a non human POV for one of the Bingo Suares and you also enjoy dungeon raiding and WoW type video games I think you should check this series out Enjoyable book but I wasn t as drawn Blue Boat in as with the first It may be that I m reaching a saturation point with some of lit rpg books and need to take a breakSo fun book sentient dungeon which explains how dungeons respawn their monsters and how monsters live behind closed doors for years just to be there to eat your character when he or she walksnEnjoy. Ice Antitype (Archetype, in his head that tries to distract himn critical moments and so must fight his mind as he fights deadly creatures Unbeknownst to both they are n for the fight of their lives as madness threatens the land.
Dakota Krout å 7 SUMMARYI highly recommend this novel and the Audible version voiced by Vikas Adam Adam s voice acting s superb and captures the Adam Adam s voice acting s superb and captures the and settings brilliantly A must read for fantasy or video game fans What a great conceptThe concept of a story from the perspective of a sentient dungeon was enthralling for me Better the cast of characters were fantastic as s the overarching story line The author did a commendable job of writing an entertaining and novel story The only home I found through the entire story was that no one had any
Suspicion Of The Dungeon S Sentience Despite Numerous Clear Indicatorsof the dungeon s sentience despite numerous clear ndicators bothered me a bit through both books but not enough to prevent me from enjoying them thoroughly I gave book 1 one star because t wasn t a story just a 13 of a story If anything book 2 s worse SPOILERS Book 2 ends with the main character dungeon going crazy and who reads fantasy books for a large dose of mental health The Devils Jug, the Crying Tree Me issues Apparently the author realized this after completing book 2 because shemmediately reverses this at the beginning of book 3 Ramesses in pretty much the stupidest possible way High power magic users specializen things like healing plants etc Well The Irish Warrior it turns out that this world has one really high powered magic user who specializesn mental health He shows up tells the dungeon to stop stealing my whispers does no magic or really anything useful because the magic user Baby, Im Back! (Return to Redemption, is crazy too and leaves Viola the MCs sane again FOR NO REASONAdditionally this book fails to tell a complete story Sure The Betrayal (The Siege it ends with a big battle but the combatants don tnclude the big bad guy the author keeps telling us about This ending The Draining Lake (Inspector Erlendur is euivalent to ending a WW II book after DunkirkI can t see why people are willing to overlook such basic failingsn this book but I will say that the portion of a story told Mers in this books well paced and written Still why would people want to spend money to read a 13 of a story Fortunately I m getting these books through my library The author really likes to explain how the dungeon does magic but A Heros Welcome if he would have skipped some of that and written one good book he would have accomplished something Ast Finding Normal is all the author accomplishess bilking his readers
#For 3 Book Sales #3 book sales of 1Bottom line an Die Germanen incomplete book with a poorly thought out story I couldn t putt down I absolutely loved this book truly I purchased the first one on a whim and I couldn t be happier Then I got this one and The Broken Sword it was even better than the last FINALLYSot s been months since I finished Dungeon Born and since then I ve been binging on LitRPGs Now that I m much versed on the genre I appreciate the way this series Haunted Houses is constructed even Everything just feels very cohesive organic and fluid I 35Still silly Still enjoyable Still too many punsBook 2 continues the adventure expanding the world and characters I didn t enjoyt as much as Book 1 for a couple reasons First the Charles Dickens in depth mechanics of the RPG leveling system began draggingt down at parts as we got VERY Christianity at the Crossroads in depth I enjoy the creativity butt also drags Second The Romanovs it doesn t feel as polished which Book 1 already had some polishing problems Jokes get repeated or scenes from the same book get re capped asf we hadn t just read them A solid edit could have cleaned that up Also and this Cravings is just a minor pet peeve the book winks at the audience just a little too much Talking about that scribe names Dakota the author s name then mentioning Dakota again asf we hadn t heard The Wedding Date it the first time or saying Dungeon Born would be a great name for a book haha gett That s the name of Book 1 just annoy me Probably not everyone but that s my gripe The book also exceeded my pun thresholdComplaints aside this Swan Song is a very enjoyable novel I was bummed whent ended I ll be picking. An alternate cover edition for ASIN B01N4UA28Both Cal and Dale have become stronger each Learn Better in spite of the other The dungeon Cal knows exactly how much their strength hasncreased and s working hard to become .
Up Book 3 once my monthly ration of Audible credits arrive Binge read this sucker the day after listening to the first book on Audible credits arrive Binge read this sucker the day after listening to the first book on After reading this book I think I prefer reading the series to listeningOverall a pretty legit book It wasn t completely predictable which was great Cal was amusing Dani was sassy and got a tad scarier Dale got lipo and Craig got vanished but no really he went from a secondary character trainer to disappearing where d he goI m really curious about that Dakota guy though He seemed pretty powerful and ntelligent Hopefully he didn t dieCan t wait for book 3 Better than the FirstDisclaimer In the El Señor del Carnaval (Jan Fabel, interest of full disclosure I personally know the author and I received access to a temporary pre release copyn exchange for editing services A review was never discussed but I enjoyed the book and feel Processing Pain in Play its deserving of a review Please note I did pay for permanent access to the final copy of the book Also my personal relationship with the author has had no Master Math impact on the following review unless saidmpact was grading aspects a bit harshly uick Look Dungeon Madness The Dukan Diet: 2 Steps to Lose the Weight, 2 Steps to Keep It Off Forever is the second bookn the Divine Dungeon series and Patton on Leadership is a fantastic follow up to the first book The concepts the same La Impostura Perversa in that the main characters a dungeon but the scenarios play out uite a bit differently than Zones of Instability in the first book Again this books a LitRPG novel with hints of the Wuxia genre meaning that what the reader gets The Riven Shield (The Sun Sword, is a book that could be ripped straight out of a video game with some awesome fight descriptions Recommended For Readers of the first book Seriously this books difficult to read as a stand alone novel because Once More With Feeling itsn t one It takes place Orange World and Other Stories immediately after the events of the first book and endsn a way which just begs for a third That being said the first book and this one are relatively What Matters Most inexpensive and uite long sof you re nterested I d recommend picking both of them up That being said I d recommend this series to anyone who really likes video games anyone who likes dungeon crawler fantasy and anyone who likes seeing something new There are a few dungeon style novels out there but very few and the concept s still fresh SPOILERS AHEAD Pros This book Linnys Sweet Dream List improved upon almost every aspect of the previous book The mechanics of the writing took a major upswing writing ualitys much better the editing Envy (Empty Coffin, is better and the consistencys better This Carnal Captive (Carnal Incorporated isn t to say the previous book was seriously hurtingn these regards but there Bad Boys On Board (Watson Brothers, is a significant difference I attribute these to the author and his team being a bit experienced After the mechanicalssues the pros start being even better The magic system gets even fleshed out while still staying simple enough where I didn t get confused The balance of the limitations on things like runes enchantments and nscriptions while being accessible TO ALL WITH THE LIMITLESS NATURE OF MANA WHILE all with the limitless nature of mana while accessible to a very select few was a brilliant touch The creatures created n the dungeon show even creativity on the part of the author with the floating jellyfish being my favorite The humor Tied Up is taken up a notch and I lovedt Also while the ending Picture This (Marsden is definitely a cliffhanger the ending felt less rushed and minor loose ends were tied up thann the last book We certainly have a major loose end to deal with n the next book but I feel like this was a much better ending arc than the first bookThe author also mproved on a handful of the mixed bag The Unsuitable Secretary (Ladies Unlaced, issues from the last book Due to thencreasing size of the dungeon and the amount of time the story takes place outside of said dungeon the book doesn t physically stagnate from being told Queen of Air and Darkness (The Dark Artifices, in the same place Theres enough variance throughout the different floors and the surface and the balance of time spent Moving is Murder (A Mom Zone Mystery, in eachs Going Home (Nugget, improve. Xponentially powerful His schemes are becoming complex and his dungeon his body deadly Dale has a nasty surprise waiting for him as he works to thwart the plans of the devious dungeon You see hes hearing a vo.